Antisipation

I was waiting for a special day to come when i wrote this.

We all know that feeling

it's the feeling you get when you're waiting

for something to happen.

 

It's the feeling you get when

your waiting for a friend

or cookies to get done baking

 

 That feeling of restlessness

of anticipation the feeling

of nerves bottled up inside

waiting to explode.

Reviews

[Ragin Cajun]

Well done the only thing I have an issue with is the word "down" in the second stanza. Did you mean done?

[Raven Starhawk]

Beautifully penned and a special read. It discloses a lovely need.

[Kyla H]

Very true, I felt anticipation when I read this as well. Nice examples!(:

[Victoria Scott]

sooooo true...well written