towards my wish

i wish there was someone-

to look deep in my eyes,

i wish there was someone-

to know when my heart cries.

i wish there was someone,

to throw her arms around me

when the night becomes too dark-

and the world feels too heavy. 

i wish i had someone

to offer me her lap anytime

when i need somewhere to hide my-

face and cry out my crime. 

i wish i had found her

among the thousands i meet-

among the ocean of coldness

among the frozen heart-beat.

but, like a flower in the winter

no more than a glimpse i ever get-

within a moment they disappear-

leaving me lonely in the sunset.

i wish in this life of mine,

someone will come out of nowhere-

like the sun, her eyes shine

no matter, even if it's winter;

those eyes keep shining in my dreams-

becomes my hallucination-

from my eyes the tear streams-

but can't blur my destination...

Author's Note

the rhyme is a little difficult to catch at some points, i hope the readers will try to catch it. and i hope they express freely what they think about it.thank you.

Reviews

[Dezelene]

It is a lovely poem, loved the way it flowed and how it shows an insight into your mind. Just beautiful (:

[Scott Metro]

This is some very beautiful yearnings. The feelings come through well.
Good job on this.

Scott

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to be alone. Sometime best not to rush love. Good things take time. Love need two people at the same place and wanting the same things. Need luck and timing. I like the poem. I could feel the need and the loneliness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote