Humanity is a ghost

humanity is a ghost
repelled by redemption
and pushed by exquisite minds
bright ideas under analytical judgement
didactically dissolving youth
before ideal minds are born
spark his forgetful memory of peace

Author's Note

Please be honest

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

It is sad. Few people sending food, water and medicine to the people in need. There are many. Where I live in Detroit. Group of people pick-up food and things being not used by companies. Feed the poor and homeless. I believe we can accept the naysayers or create a wave of concern, kindness and mercy. Humanity. Just sleeping. Need a loud wake-up call. Thank you Anna for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Anna]

I agree. Thank you for reading

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Anna.

[Locke Redwyne (night sy..]

Wow... That's really good. I like the idea. What does didactically mean?

[Anna]

It means intended to teach :)and 𝑻𝒉𝒂𝒏𝒌 you

[Lyssa]

I like the bit of irony and paradox. It makes people think. The only change, possibly, is to change "young"' to "youth". It really just depends on which relates more to your purpose.

[Anna]

Thank you:) I’ll chnage that right now!