tear me apart

Give me the night,

Take away my light.

Force stars into my heart,

Make my soul start.

Wake up my eyes,

Take away any lies.

Fake it if you have to,

I'm a book overdue.

Dive into my mind,

Fix what once was blind.

Stake your claim,

Find out what I shame.

Fan out my memories,

Dust off your discoveries.

Take the shutters down,

I will stop wearing a frown.

Give me the night,

Take away my light.

Force stars into my heart,

Create abstract art.

Reviews

[Chaos_Collector]

Beautiful and destructive at the same time. You have a fine rhythm incorporated into this poem. This poem is certainly a keeper. Nice work :)

[anna]

Thank you. :)

[Chaos_Collector]

You're welcome :)