Unconstrained

While digging through the attic,

early this morning,

I stumbled on

the key to outside.

I think I'll stay

out here for now!

The air is eaier to breath!

Reviews

[fireblossom]

This little gem shows discipline in its structure and theme. Give me a poet who boils it down to a brilliant simple thought or series of thoughts. Well written. And also compelling as it made me want to know the character of this million year story.