Just A Waltz

It's all just a waltz, 

I'm all turned around.

You hand me a drink, 

and say "lose the frown".

The room is twirling,

I can't feel the ground.

We raised our glasses, 

the wine stained my gown.

I could go somewhere.

I'd never be found.

This waltz is over,

and I'm leaving town.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A waltz and escape. I did like this poem. Sometime better to run than find a dead-end. Thank you Emmy for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[C. Lee Battaglia]

This made the reader think and truly ask questions that find the poem more and more interesting.
This poem was very unique and sentimental.
I could feel the emotion rippling off of this poem.
You are a very talented author/writer.
Keep up the great work!

C. Lee Battaglia

[Emmy]

Thank you so much, your review made my day!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

You're very welcome! IT was fantastic!

[ebk]

Interesting story line, but it seems stunted by the rhyme? Perhaps explore longer, lusher lines to expand upon the intriguing imagery you have here.

[Emmy]

Thank you, I really appreciate feedback. I think it would be a good challenge for me to go back and rework the lines to be longer.