Numb

This is my first acrostic poem. I hope you enjoy!

Nearly everyday I go through the same routine 
Unleashed, yet not truly free to be me 
My life very mundane, everyday the same 
But I must keep up the charade, to please all but me 

Author's Note

Feedback is welcome!

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Fabulous piece of work and so much truth!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Geshia_Poet]

I love how you made it so simple yet at the same time it says so much. the words flow, they each hold a meaning.

[anonymous]

Thank you! :)

[Mai L Nissen]

I like the simplicity - illustrating well that you do things by routine not because you actually want to, it is merely a chore that needs to be done!

[anonymous]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing. :)

[Amelia May]

I love how the simplicity of the poem easily portrays the daily routine of always doing the same thing.
However, the only thing that bothered me about the poem is that there is no end punctuation after "me".

[anonymous]

Thank you for reviewing! And that you for pointing that out. I will fix that. :)