The Me Within

Ever had another you within you?

The me within

Is different than the me you see.

Bound by bond, myself and I.

Woven, Intertwined, Inseparable.

Yet.

Bound as brothers, they can war.

Light hurling darkness.

The blight clouding the light.

A beast born in the newfound dark.

It.

Howls, Screams, Gnarls

Light, it consumes.

Myself and I, brothers in bond,

Sit in anguish and darkness

Will.

The beast rules,

The me within,

It is now the me you see.

Myself and I, Brothers bound in sorrowful bond.

Not.

Author's Note

Very rough draft, missing the last two stanzas.

Reviews

[kyam]

Excellent! Intense and meaningful. The brother and I alternates but the same. Extremely well written....Kyam

[KanaDream]

Very powerful. I can't wait for the finished version. :)

Keep Dreaming.

[Anthony]

Thanks! I'll try and work on it soon. Your poem about time was good as well.