You are so lovely

Every word that you say sounds so lovely, 

Especially when you tell me that you love me

What once was a crush,

Became something so profound at the touch

Author's Note

Feel free to tell me what you think about my writing or if you want to give me advice about it.

Reviews

[Relic]

No advice to give. You've written about a feeling that is universal. Nice job.

[Shy Joe]

What starts with a "Hi!" and a smile can end in a rocking chair. Or does it really ever end, if it's the true stuff? Maybe it carry's on as an energy meant to be fed to others.

Enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing.