Dream Summer

for the contest "chillaxin". light-hearted perfectness!

warm sun
slight breeze
hammock swings between palm tress

lay back
play guitar
all your worries seem so far

sunset
sunrise
doesn't matter which, you're still alive

cocktails

fresh fruit
no need to worry about a three piece suit

smells of suncream
and sights of sin
it's a thousand times better when you're
CHILLAXIN!

Author's Note

ignore grammar.

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Lovely dream scape you wrote...reminds me when I am in Hawaii...kudos on the use of word Chillaxin...I love when Poets use the possibilities of language.

[Tamme]

The perfect picture of chillaxin'. The rhymn is pleasent and I love the flow. Thank you for entering it my contest.