hunger

simple poem

i am hungry,
hungry of love,
hungry of care,
no one is there to feed me,
no one is thre to look me
all are busy, i dont know
why they a
re so busy,
but i know one thing,
i am still hungry

Reviews

[ShooBLeeDoo]

I know what its like to be hugry too

[anumenon]

you toooooo

[Annie S]

Yes I agree that it is simple,but i like it because the way you use the words it makes people understand it with great thought beyond the mind so good job
Looking forward in seeing more :)

[anumenon]

it is a simple poem, to all peoples