colorful flames

inspired by candlelight

rainbows in the light of a flame
shining bright beautifully; untame
rays of color striking eyes
illuminating depths fine and wise
warm air with ribbons from palletes
piercing heat that chimes away
wrapping time; life's show of lights
unblind colors shown in black and white

Reviews

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

i like black n white
and ur title makes me smile

[The Old Ashes]

Yeah the rhyme and rhythm is awesome. Vibrant, beautiful, colorful, strong.

[Hollywood]

The rhyme & rythm is really good. I enjoyed it.

[Huggy Bear]

Very vibrant and colorful