Just Let Go

A poem that inspires to do new things, to follow ones heart!!

Legs stretched and arms apart,

Jump like you never did before

Leap like you never have before

Then, you may sit and fart!

Eyes open, bright and wide,

Look like you never did before

See like you never have before

Your zeal, you never should hide!

Take the turns, try the twist,

Plunge like you never did before

Dive like you never have before

Walk in the road, full of mist!

Know not why, know not how,

Dance like you never did before

Waltz like you never have before

Do the thing, you didn't till now!

What is to gain?

By being this insane?

The joy, the thrill,

Not being run of the mill,

That ecstasy,

One can’t explain!

Reviews

[Kuldeep desai]

Last stanza i liked it very much...........very well written.....Its an energising poem....

[Jamsheed Shafi]

a good idea, letting go.
nicely written poem.
enjoyed reading it.
it really inspires us to move, move & move.

[Aparna]

thank you Jamsheed :)

[Eleanor]

Its a great poem!
Well written :)
Hope to read more by you!
The only one thing we cannot do is to let go.

[Aparna]

thanks a bunch :)

[M.A.Rathore]

Yea. Really it is nice with message and you tried in rhyming pattern yet some of sounds are to be more considerable. Overall it is a good poem..
Keep writing and let it go....
Have a nice time.

[Aparna]

thank u :)

[M.A.Rathore]

Welcome always...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

well written! great message!
philosophical poem!
it was fun reading it!
i liked it!!!
:)

[Aparna]

thanks a lot :D

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!!! :) :)