I'm a mess.

Trust me, I'm a mess.

You don't understand what I've been through.

I'm a damsel in distress.

Not that it would mean a thing to you.

I'm just broken.

The world doesn't seem to understand.

No ones missing token.

It's like I'm in no man's land.

Trust me, I'm a disaster.

From hell escorted to earth.

I can't get away faster.

Living's not what it's worth.

Reviews

[Bumble]

Beautiful poem!

[Apatheia]

Thanks!

[Steven Cash]

nice write

and trust me, you aren't the only one

like that song Stitches by Switchfoot

---

I'm not the only one who sees them
I'm not the only one they keep up at night
I'm not the only one not sleeping
I'm not the only one who's dreaming out loud

---

anytime you need to talk just pm me

[Apatheia]

Thank you dear

[Steven Cash]

No problem Hannah

[eatmills]

So that was you that was sitting in the front of the train from hell. I thought I recognized you. I will gladly trade you my hell for yours anytime. Nice write.

[Apatheia]

Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

Easy to become a disaster. Hard to stay organized. Nice flow of thoughts and I like how you ended the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Apatheia]

Thank you very much.

[kdanill]

You look so happy. How can you be so sad? But I can relate. Thanks,

[Apatheia]

Looks can be decieving, dear. Thanks for reading it. :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

no-ones missing token is such a great line...makes it for me...good stuff. But PLEASE try to cheer up

[Apatheia]

Thank you and I'll try. :)

[Marcos Berenguer]

Very emotional.
"From hell escorted to earth." Very nice writing.
Sometimes I feel this way too.

[Apatheia]

Thank you very much

[Marcos Berenguer]

You're very welcome--hopefully you don't always feel this way!

[Apatheia]

I don't. :) But it seems I can't write happy stuff very well.

[Marcos Berenguer]

That's good! :-) Yeah, I know what you mean--believe me, I haven't written anything really happy or funny.

[Apatheia]

I don't think I ever really do because when I do write its when I have like strong feelings (normally when im upset)towards something or what not.

[Marcos Berenguer]

True! Writing can be a great escape, and if you're upset and don't want to talk to anybody, you can write everything you feel and it makes you feel better--and it's a form of art! Funny how that works. :-)

[Apatheia]

I know, i love it. :)

[Marcos Berenguer]

:-)

[Daliah Valley]

You. Are. A. POET.