I miss you

A lot of people can relate to this

I miss you so much
You were so brave
On my spare time
I visit your grave

Why did you have to go
And leave me here all alone
I miss you so much
It physically hurts

I can't believe you're gone
When you did absolutely nothing wrong
All I can do
Is say I miss you

Author's Note

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Reviews

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touching poem about loss and hurt

[barleygirl]

When addressing this topic, the best thing is to be straightforward & heartfelt, as you've done so well here. Your details show us what's at issue here & there's a strong unwillingness to accept that this situation is for real. I love that you show this sensation, one that's often not dealt with in a message about death. I hate that we are often urged to accept it. You've shown how it really feels (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[LittleBigDreams]

Thank you very much, I am glad to for your feedback.

[Chris Shaw]

A touching little write of loss, dealing with the early stages of grief.