Deeply For You...

I just wrote this when I got overwhelmed by an awesome song...Writing stuff is the best way to express and emote. This is about...I really don't know...probably a strong attraction towards someone?

Deeply for You...

Deep in an emotion so profound,

bloomed a rose in thy's name,

whose thorns doth scorched my heart,

though I bleed for you.

Thine blissful thoughts,

glistening pale in the moon,

come dark and deep,

like soulful music, and fain blooms.

Away from this maid's affections,

lying thither in a fragile veil of passion,

wafts of fragrance from dear incense,

float round in want of amour.

Oh, feel the burn of tender thoughts,

changing by the Time's play,

wishes so earnest of 'tis,

which fade as truth exists.

Author's Note

Do you think I have used the Shakespearean words appropriately?

Reviews

[Demii]

This was really touching, and I thinking you used shakespearean words just fine, this was really sweet as well, "Thine blissful thoughts, glistening pale in the moon, come dark and deep, like soulful music, and fain blooms." I find it really sweet.

[Aparna Krishnan]

Thank you! I really appreciate it!

[oscardelamarca]

think your lyrics are very good friend, beyond the great Shakespeare, congratulations

[Aparna Krishnan]

Thank you so much!

[stars are far]

That was very good..the feelings portrayed here are amazing..well done

[Aparna Krishnan]

Thank you! That really means a lot to me!

[stars are far]

my pleasure :)