One Winter Night...

Play the music, start reading at 2:00 ;-)

Dark sky

Cold winter night

Like a menace,

I stumble, through the shadows of the pines

 

Fog’s eerie mysteries

Floating above the frozen sea

The wind sings to me

the notes of broken melody…

 

Snowflakes falling down

Catching the rhythm of the tears on your face

Oh how I wish…

to wipe them with my hands

 

Once white snow

Slowly turning into blood of sorrow

 

I hear your voice

Calming my soul…

“I need you. Please don’t go…Please…”

Author's Note

I've never seen winter, all is my imagination. I'm creating a story out of this poem... Reviews are very much appreciated. :) -olive

Reviews

[Emily]

'Floating above the frozen sea'
Love this line!!
Keep it up!!

[Aprille]

Thank you.

[Dayran]

A great feel for the Christmas season. Nice ...

[Aprille]

Thank you Dayran.

[willweb]

Very sad and filled with longing. I enjoyed this one today.

[Aprille]

Thank you. :)