Memories

Memories

by Rhonda B.

All the flashbacks

Are still in my head

The first day of Kindergarten

To my first boyfriend

To moving into my new house

To moving into a different school

To having a new baby brother

To experincing two animal deaths

To everything

Hopefully when I grow old

I'll still remember the memories that I do today

♥

R.I.P JACK THE 12 YEAR OLD DOG AND MISSY THE 21 YEAR OLD CAT

Author's Note

i'm only 11 turning 12 on june 22, so i might not have the greatest skills writing.

Reviews

[Chaoscaine]

Ok, I like the emotional value in your poem, but it leaves a lot to be desired from someone out of your head. I can't really understand what the poem is about, other and memories, and there is no clear pathos appeal toward thought or toward mourning. I only see that you are in a mood to remember.... also, you misspelled experience.

Hate to be harsh, but I see promise, and I want to see you bloom, so I encourage you to just look at this poem again, and then speak to the audience, so that they can understand better.