Only You!!!!!!!

"For a friend......whose friendship made me realize.....how lucky I'm to be his friend.."

You used to be a friend

But don't know when,

Those feelings became different,

Just like love, for the first time.

 

Told me to be careful about this feeling,

Blocked me from loving you a bit,

But my confession still found its way to you,

A little hasty, a lot late and pushed you away.

 

Yes, you are the one, Only you,

That I love, more than myself,

My heart feels empty, my tears keep falling

Although I know your heart has someone else.

 

But it's true, it's only you,

Can't you give me a chance, just for once,

I'm trying hard to become like before,

A friend you lean on, a friend you adore.

 

But I'm still waiting, for you to come,

To smile for me, to lean on me,

As love or as friends before,

And I'm still waiting, Still,

For you, Only you.

Author's Note

They say love is the greatest feeling......but for me it's the friendship, which is not as selfish and possessive as love rather is comforting and warm like the winter sun.

Reviews

[Terrence Chang]

Well written Archana. Fabulous portray of the poem

[Chirayu]

Beautiful!!.. Great piece of writing to!!...

[Jordan Smith]

Wonderful poem here. I enjoyed reading it. I know how it feels with the waiting game. I hope you can find someone who treats you right :) Great job

[Tej K]

Beautiful heartfelt poem. I hope you don't have to wait too long.

[hanir]

I can trully relate to this! I feel you!
Nicely written!

[sarik]

thats loving.....each words add glory to it....only you rocks....

[AaronFreitas]

This is a beautiful write for your friend! Makes me wish I had a friend like that :) Nice work :)

[Bear]

It was interesting how in the first two stanzas you didn't personalize them by using the word "I" am used the word "me" in an unemotional way. While the last three stanzas seem more personal with feelings evolving and growing. Nice concept and a show of your writing abilities, well done my friend. Clap! Clap!

This is in response to your author's note :~)
You meet someone and they become an acquaintance and this is an emotion, you get to know them and they become a friend and that is a more intense emotion. Over time you become good friends then best friends which are even more intense emotions. One day you realize you love each other which is an ever more intense emotion, so they are all the same emotion but with different level of intensity and involvement.

[wordman]

and i will wait for you,a touching write !

[siddhi]

this is great i liked it very much archana i am thinking that you are a deep writer see you wrote here a
peotry line in your comment also love rather is comforting and warm like the
winter sun






a great write i would request you to write a peom for a special occasion just want to test you and its a great thig to write







this request is not like youhave to fulfil do it just if you like


thankyou for sharing this wonderful peotry

[Archana]

Thanks Siddhi......I'll surely write a poem .......but which special ocassion you want me to write.

[siddhi]

anyone would do
i wrote jst want to test you