Turncoat

You're like my shadow

with me in the light

but nowhere in darkness.

Reviews

[Paradox]

Sublimely haunting. Well done!

[Mayank]

Yes, there are some afraid of darkness.

[Robert]

So true this is, a very good write Chirag.

[Mitali Shah]

Superb description dear. keep it up. :)

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
thought provoking in few words:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[AaronFreitas]

Nice imagery provided with these words :)

[andrew mitchell]

I enjoyed this short write. well done!

[wordman]

well the poem says one thing and the title suggests another

[B]

I love this new style you are writing through
Its really a thought provoking piece
She is your shadow in light
Never bringing the dark
although a shadow is all dark
so even in darkness she only brings light

lovely

[Willard Wells]

Interesting thoughts. Good writing.