Wandering birds

Wandering birds
desperate
lurking for shelter
from the dark clouds
about to cry,
but, who can
contending with
exist where
there are no trees.

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Strikingly dark!
The imagery is vivid and beautiful in its own way.
Enjoyed reading it.

[Chirag Kumar]

I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.

[Perkele.7885]

my suggestions
desperately
looking
but, who can
contending with
exist,where there are no trees
no period after cry

[marcus]

I like this a lot, really good!!

[Robert]

Nicely done, yes we are cutting too many trees done on this Earth. I very thoughtful piece to remind us of this tragedy.

[Mitali Shah]

Lovely hidden social message to humans to plant more trees for everyone's survival. Keep it up.

[AaronFreitas]

Even birds need safety and security from mother nature... to not have trees must be like a dark bird nightmare! Awesome words... well written my friend :)

[Jamestown]

Well written!
The freedom of our winged friends is the freedom I would guess
everyone desires:) Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Sami Khalil]

"with the breeze
For here they exist, but not trees"

They have wings to fly. They are free to roam and glide the spaces. An excellent take on that...:)...

[Willard Wells]

Yes I see the birds darting about in an effort to avoid a heavy downpour. No trees and the ground just running red and brown as the water flood over the ground as they continue to search. Ok I drank too much coffee. Thanks. Apparently I liked it.

[B]

Very nicely done
Birds are born for complete freedom
no time to rest or be restrained

Gorgeously clever