Casual date

Casual date

She speaks and I listen.

But she's unaware

that I have a flair

for getting lost in her

without letting her know

to decipher her

for she's still a mystery.

Maybe history

was rude on me before

so that I could have her now

by my side

forever.

Author's Note

I wrote this when I wasn't in a mood of writing one. Prone to errors. Suggestions are welcome :)

Reviews

[marcus]

It sounds good to me, i liked it.

[Deepak Sharma]

Nyc one....felt a litle pain..

[AaronFreitas]

Very nice work... I could picture the scene with your words... very good work :)

[andrew mitchell]

A clever write that has a punch in words to entertain as you are lost in love . Love this!

[Mitali Shah]

Sweet, naughty and intense says it all :) well done boy

[KWP]

oooh I like that - quite the charmer aern't you - and you say you were not in the mood - well bravo - you did well X

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Sweet sentiment and well said:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Willard Wells]

Lost within the aura of the one you love. Good luck. Nice work.

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your appreciation Willard :)

[B]

Amazing how women can be all the colors on that spectrum
I guess that date is important to you

Makes you think
How many people are destined to meet ..... and fall for one another
Its all written

Nice write

[Perkele.7885]

I gather that this is your second time around with this girl then. Could it be that you came across as rude to her without you being aware of it. Step lightly if you are to win her heart!