Predator

Temperature at its peak.

Body catches cold.

Eyes recoil in shock

as the lady fits the mould

of a seductress

raring to pounce

upon the mortal flesh

which is soaked

in the blood of lust.

The voluptuous scent

of her trickling sweat

the luscious lips

the fuller breasts

casts a spell on the prey

enough to rivet him

and compel him to

surrender

to the passions of the predator.

- C Kumar

August 8 2015

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

interesting piece not sure what the last line means though

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
short sweet to the point:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Mitali Shah]

Good one. Indeed very bold and shocking ;)

[wordman]

well i liked this ditty,good job
pay no attention to that man on a trike

[Perkele.7885]

If I interpret the poem correctly Chirag, line 1 is not good English nor is line 4 in this application.
You need some slight re-write.

[Chirag Kumar]

Ok Raj. I will try to make the required changes. Thanks for your review :)