Ships of thirst

Ships of thirst sail across dark skies,
keen to collide with rocks of reality
and plunge into oceans of quietude.

- C Kumar

August 9 2015

Reviews

[Mitali Shah]

Well penned dear. Thanks for sharing

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks dear

[Mayank]

Brevity is an art. Good write.

[Willard Wells]

Nice imagery, but the sub message is not clear for me.

[andrew mitchell]

This reads like giving up when life is just too hard to go on and they just want peace in death!

[wordman]

sounds like defeat to me my friend

[Perkele.7885]

This particular poem of yours is a far cry from your better efforts. This poem does not make any impression with me at all.
This is not the end all. I am but, one reviewer and I tend to call them like I see them.
Most of your writing tends to be superior material.
I think you may have have been reaching here.

[Kajal Sharma]

this reminds me of the poem " rime of an ancient mariner" by S. T. Coleridge......great write

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your review Kajal :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

A sweet, short and simple write. Thanks for sharing. :) keep writing. :)

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your review Gurleen :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

You're welcome :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

A very profound reverie penned in a few words..
Enjoyed it! :)

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your review :)