Devout lips

They said,

"She's pious no more."

But, for her,

she attained sanctitude,

when her devout lips

switched ways,

to meet mine.

- C Kumar

1st Sept 2015

Reviews

[B]

We all care to be pious
But what happens when you meet the right person

Do you let go
Or do you choose to do things right this time

So that moment of deciding
It lays the future ahead

Desire is a very strong thing to overcome

Beautiful :)

[Chirag Kumar]

Exactly Nisreenaa. Thanks for stopping by :)

[andrew mitchell]

Nice and cute...............

[KWP]

cute - and they lived happily ever after .. ?

[Willard Wells]

Cute piece of love and romance.

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for stopping by and commenting :)

[dexterous sam]

beautiful ...great words ..especially words are beautifully placed ...well done bro

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks Sam :)

[Naina]

amazing yaa.. You wrote it so well.. I liked it..:)

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your review Naina :)

[Naina]

always my pleasure Chirag.:)

[Mitali Shah]

simply lovely and unique :)

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks Mitali :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Society has always shackled love in the name of purity & chastity.
The narrator must be truely important for her then, to go against everything and everyone for the one connection.
Lively imagery.
Lovely write.

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks fornur review Jyoti. Its high time we open up ourselves to love and not harbor hypocripsy within us.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Indeed. You are welcome.

[Perkele.7885]

You have given yourself an honorable position if not lofty position if she can give up her chaste lips to share them with you oh Holy Muckity Muck!

[Chirag Kumar]

Lol. I wish that happens asap :P

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such a beautiful image you have painted for us, Chirag...a kiss ordained by God, perhaps... love this...well done