Simple Love

Simple Love

Scores of tips, a bounty of advice from my friends, to please my babe, and keep her in love with me. But I wish to be content, for all i crave is simplicity.

Some small talks, as we walk across the college lane, a quick peck on her cheek, to see her face turn red, and watch her beauty unfold to its fullest, or a simple stroll across the beach lines, under the crimson sky,
our palms in unison where we stand to witness,
the beauty of the sunset,
walking miles hand in hand during heavenly pours,
or sharing a bowl of porridge during the cold nights,
cuddling up in one blanket, warming each other till dawn,
and with many such small acts,
I could make her smile.

Her smile, a blessing in disguise,
to bind me with cheer.
Each time she smiled away, shyingly while exchanging glances,
it was the perfect moment for me,
which I now call as love.

My pals had given me 101 tips for impressing.
Yet I could win her with such simple ways,
for love doesn't need techniques necessarily.
It happens when its bound to.
Such cute acts and many such,
maybe even writing poems like these for her, is all I need,
to proclaim my love for her.

C Kumar & Mitali Shah

12th September 2015

Author's Note

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Reviews

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that's the thing about tips and advice: it's all relative...sometimes learning what works is half the fun of being able to connect...genuineness and honesty outweigh any tip or advice any time...if you love her, she knows...then you will know if she loves you back :)

[Chirag Kumar]

True words Ledrew. Thanks for commenting :)

[andrew mitchell]

How love finds away and then to keep it!

[Laura S-C]

A lovely poem including many lovely things well done.

[B]

Doesn't take much
to be with her
if she is true

[Jamestown]

Simply sweet, enjoyed reading this piece:)
Love will find a way if it is true, no tips needed!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for commenting and liking my work Jamestown :)

[Connie]

what a lovely picture you've painted

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for the appreciation Connie. I am glad you liked it :)

[kyam]

So loving and romantic, you can get so lost in it. Talking about other people helping him with his love, but he didnt even need it at all proclaiming his love for her......Kyam

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for appreciating my work Kyam :)

[anamika]

really a good one! keep going

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks Anamika :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Beautiful, warm and a lovely poem.
How love blooms in such simple and affectionate ways.
Great romantic piece!

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your appreciation Jyoti :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.

[An owl on the moon]

Beautifully loving and tender collaboration. Love thrives in simplicity, in gentle gestures of giving and living in this flow of wonder. May your love grow like that gentle garden that nourishes and satisfies life so deliciously. :)

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your kind words Craig. I appreciate your comment :)

[Willard Wells]

True love needs no tricks, just devotion to the one you love. This is one of the best I have read of your work. Very well done.

[Chirag Kumar]

I am glad you liked our collaboration. Thanks for your appreciation Willard :)