Crush

Her talks are intriguing but lips are fine

She radiates, splintering into an essence of divine.

Time stops ticking when I wander in her eyes

Nobles away from such addiction are often the wise.

Subtle smiles scare me with infatuation sublime.

Her mystic shyness shatters my romantic paradigm.

I steer, only to witness myself drowned,

into the arms of the universe, once left disowned.

- C Kumar 

Reviews

[R.M.C]

Very good; sublime vocabulary. There are just a few thing's I'd like to mention:
"of divine" doesn't make sense by itself; you could say "so divine" so it reads "an essence so divine"
And I would swap "infatuation sublime" to read "sublime infatuation".
Lastly, the first line and 4th line could possibly do with some with some rewording...