Dedication

A Poem by Ari

My first haiku, ironically enough.

All of my haiku

are now belong to you. All.

Congratulations.

© 2008 Ari

Author's Note

Comments appreciated.

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Emily Rose

Upon rereading this, I have to ask: are you punning on "all your base are belong to us?" Because I didn't notice that the first time.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Emily Rose

I'm always amazed what people can accomplish in so few words. I'm a little confused who you're speaking to, though ;-)

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michael Handel

This is really good, and cute. I've yet to attempt a haiku...I think of it as requiring a certain patience and attention that I lack. I enjoyed all of your syllables, as I do all of your work.

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Ari

Lexington, KY

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I'm a fifth-year college student in Secondary English Ed, and I love writing (obviously, or I wouldn't be here). I write mostly poetry about my life, but I know that poetry isn't my strong point, so I.. more..