The Secret

A Dream

Becky

Happy 14th Anniversary.

 

I dreamed three words within my mind

that longed to touch her heart
Each a third of the love
I had felt for her from the start

I'd hid these words I'd treasured so
praying they would only heed
But needing love they wanted out
to touch the soul they'd freed

So now at last I let them fly
as all would freely do
That she might know the first be I
the others Love and You

Tate

                     

Author's Note

The answer to all who seek it. The eternal valentine !!

Reviews

[Magdelena]

This was stunning! I saw so much in you piece that I felt as if i were reading one of my own. To hide behind ourselves, as I know many of us do, including I! Then to suddenly feel that freedom to come forth and speak of what is in our hearts is a feeling of re-birth. Like being a child again and finding their first joy in life and running with it.. That's what I saw in your piece. The feelings of 'at last I am free'


Fantastic!


Magdelena xx

[Denali Wolfe]

I could really relate to this poem. It struck home for me! Well done!

[Marie]

The special three words given their own poem...
Love the Bee Gees...

[Michael Soul]

cool that's nice truly

[OctoberDawn]

I love this poem, the words flow so elegantly and touch the very soul. I read it once, then twice, and finally a third time! Bravo sir

[Jadey]

Very romantic. Great poem. love it.

So now at last I let them fly
as all would freely do
That she might know the first be I
the others Love and You

[joshua deathdealer]

I've got to study more into this scheming. There is a lot more to it than I thought. lol Anyways this is a awesome poem with a brilliant ending.. Took me a second to get it but that is what makes it brilliant. She is beautiful.. if you don't mind me saying so and what a great song to accompany this poem. Excellent work.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

I like this, Tate, but I guessed the secret long before the ending. Sweet!

[Lilly]

"But needing love they wanted out
to touch the soul they'd freed"

I love these lines in particular. A very nice poem here Tate.

[AK]

That was so sweet!

[rosemary keogh]

another sweet romantic poem. flows beautifully. thank you for sharing :)