The Roots Of Love

I am the roots, You are the tree.

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Aris
"OMG I can't believe you added that picture lol"
Tate's Poem is hanging in the background.

Author's Note

This I wrote to my daughter on her last night as a child.The night before she left for college

Reviews

[RainyDay]

Man, this is gorgeous! So full of loveliness! A resounding awwwh could be heard as the poem ended. What wonderful evoking of emotion-what a way to convey such an over-conveyed feeling!
And as usual your perfect flow and rhyme only helped your message through the minds (and hearts!) of your readers. I don't doubt that I'll return to read this poem again just to feel the beauty of it...

Really, thank you.

[lindsay]

This is really adorable and romantic, if poetry can be such a thing. I love the idea of tree and you are the roots. Very clever.

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

That is very pretty. I love the picture too. Very nice. I love trees!
Melanie

[Tracie Skarbo]

Excellent job here. I love the picture...it gives mystery to your words. I think you are going to be another of my favorite writers on here...

[Bud]

A most beautiful piece of poetic Magic, here. Words will do no justice describing the divine power in this one. A very pleasant write of devotion to a loved one. Nothing better or stronger than that! It has been captured so well, here. Wonderfully Magnificent!

[Helen Crutchett]

Simply gorgeous poem my friend. Flowed beautifully. Now why can't I write like that!?

Helena :)

[Nautili]

i love how you speak of the continuing energy of a tree, although it's leaves may fall off and die, springtime will come and it will bud and flourish again. I wish more people had this rather realistic view of the ebb and flow in a relationship...there would be a lot less divorce, I think. I also like how you did not describe what type of tree, whatever she chooses to be , you are there to support and strengthen her.

[Poeticpiers]

simple and elegant in its simplicity Well done Tate

[An owl on the moon]

Your metaphor is simply beautiful and profound, speaking of your legacy and love. What a visual, verbal work of art!

[Domo]

That's truly beautiful Tate.
This is a great poem, its lines compliment one another.
~Domo~

[MarkGMelvin]

Love it