The Roots Of Love

I am the roots, You are the tree.

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Aris
"OMG I can't believe you added that picture lol"
Tate's Poem is hanging in the background.

Author's Note

This I wrote to my daughter on her last night as a child.The night before she left for college

Reviews

[RainyDay]

Man, this is gorgeous! So full of loveliness! A resounding awwwh could be heard as the poem ended. What wonderful evoking of emotion-what a way to convey such an over-conveyed feeling!
And as usual your perfect flow and rhyme only helped your message through the minds (and hearts!) of your readers. I don't doubt that I'll return to read this poem again just to feel the beauty of it...

Really, thank you.

[cest la vie]

Beautiful, Tate!!
The roots of love run rather deep..

[Jenny Nelson]

Very beautiful with great description to convey. Makes me think of (some) my kids slowly but surely starting to head off on their own. A very nice sentiment.

[Alicante lullaby]

very smooth write and it reminds me of a movie''THE FOUNTAIN''i dont know why but it does,i loved how you ended it, ''you will always be a part of me'',Tate sir,it is so assuring,i don't know what to say,the root allows the tree to be a fir,a pine but tree would still be a part of it,it is devine,that's all i would say,you just gave me another topic to wonder,sir

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I love the emotion behind this.