The Roots Of Love

I am the roots, You are the tree.

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"OMG I can't believe you added that picture lol"
Tate's Poem is hanging in the background.

Author's Note

This I wrote to my daughter on her last night as a child.The night before she left for college

Reviews

[RainyDay]

Man, this is gorgeous! So full of loveliness! A resounding awwwh could be heard as the poem ended. What wonderful evoking of emotion-what a way to convey such an over-conveyed feeling!
And as usual your perfect flow and rhyme only helped your message through the minds (and hearts!) of your readers. I don't doubt that I'll return to read this poem again just to feel the beauty of it...

Really, thank you.

[Blue Belle]

That is so adorable, so inspirational, and so hopeful. It brought a smile to my face and to my heart.

[David Lewis Paget]

How did I miss this, Tate? I just happened to see it listed as a 'related' near someone else's poem, and here we are. Short and succinct as the best poems are, there is an ocean of feeling here, and so well expressed. Your best poetry always seems to emanate from the heart, Tate, it's where you excel.

[Brave girl]

it's so sweet,she's lucky to have you

[Green]

This is so sweet! It may have just been me, but I felt like there was a little sadness at seeing her go even though you were willing to do so.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Aww this is so sweet.

[The Nameless]

I'm sure she found this a wonderful gift and is proud to be your daughter.
The pictures are really beautiful.
And so is the poem =D

[Carolann Dowsett]

What a beautiful gift of love for your little girl. I bet she treasures this so much. Another amazing write.

[Light and ashes]

Awe :) I love this so much. The last two stanzas are my favorite part. I love the comparison of the tree and the roots, absolutely stunning poetry, 100.

[Harmony Babin]

Awwe, I love it, its so sweet and touching. Love the song too!