Love

May the Lord Bless you and Keep you all the days of your life.

Becky

If size were what life were about

then we would not matter a bit

Not to the thoughts that man can dream

nor all the sins he could commit

Our mind is what gives us value

sensitive beyond it's design

Compassion and love will endure

in both your children and in mine

This little blue planet of life

the only home that we know of

Holds us in it's loving embrace

as here was born every love

No matter what life can collect

nor how long life grants you in time

Why would it matter to the earth

or to the heights of mountains you climb

Humanity won't remember 

the man who commanded his friends

Only he who gives hope and love

so that life on earth never ends

Author's Note

Can a thought or feeling be larger than a universe? Love is the only trait that is worth remembering because it is meant to be given away selflessly. The recipient is as happy to receive it as you were to give it!

Reviews

[Leigh]

Hi Tate,

If all your neutrons were connected together and engaged at the same time they would be able to create a thought sequence far greater than the size of any universe known to humankind. Your deep thinking mind has stirred the pot and may well bring many others into action and this in itself may start a chain reaction.

Your poetry is a catalyst for other poets and I am always interested in what you have to say

Leigh

[Tate Morgan]

Leigh I am extremely humbled by your thoughts. Thank you so much I hope you have a great Christmas

[Erotic Goddess]

Not to the thoughts that man can dream

nor all the sins he could commit

Love this, love the pics, love the summary!! Beautiful piece that was wonderful to read and very thoughtful.

xxoxx

[Lovely Lady]

Thank you for this sweet write during the time of Celebrating Life. I say all year long, why do we wait to celebrate... when everyday is a celebration of life. Merry Christmas to you and yours. May Blessings Abound for you in the new year and everyday! Loves.
~lovely♥lady~

[Liz Alexander]

I love it... Christmas is the time for us to begin agian

[Andrew Wright]

everything is only relative... who is to say what truly is valuable? A great piece.

[Crowley]

This one is...great writing Tate, eloquent, beautiful and such sage advice no matter what you circumstances...really loved this.

[Samuel Dickens]

No truer words have been spoken. Thank you, Tate.

[Hollow Man]

'Can a thought or feeling be larger than a universe' - no/yes/maybe, but who's to say the universe isn't comprised of exactly that, thoughts and feelings, anything created by the mind/concious really. You have some amazing lines in this poem. Thank you for sharing.

KGS

[EmpressPoetess]

Oh, if only we could keep these feelings and actions daily in our lives, then we would make the heart of our creator so glad by imitating His love, because He is the same every moment of everyday! Very nice write.

[I Am Svetlana]

I really like this. It partially reminded me of "Moulin Rouge" when the guy says: "Come what may," because no matter what happens, that love will still be there and appear strong. Indeed, love makes the world go round, but it could also destroy us. It is a very powerful and jolting emotion and we must be sure we fully understand this feeling and how we react to it and what it brings to us.

[Julie Beth]

you did a great job on this :)