a man

a man

can't slit

this side of the deal

doesn't want to eat

whilst  self-deceptions ambrosia

churns

Reviews

[Bella Luna]

Unfortunately the beatles song that I'm listening to while reading this has nothing to do with the mood, like your other one had. Yet here this smallest poem caught my attention, and I could relate to this so very well, which is odd, for one I'm a girl not a guy, ahaha, and for two, it wasn't I who experienced the feelings, it was someone I knew, very well. I really do enjoy this, and Once again, I'm telling you i envy you, this time, for being able to convey an emotion in such few words, that I could not do in less than about two paragraphs.. :p