The Cross

Reflection on what the Cross actually means.

Loving You

I love and adore you.

This seed, turns to this root,

This root to this tree,

This tree bears your fruit.

We are like a tree,’

in slow cookers,

I submit

I surrender to you.

I love your perfect will.

Jesus how amazing your grace!

Reviews

[Ruth]

My favorite part of this is your use of rhythm, and the quickening of pace; It's very enjoyable to read!
Slow cookers seems to come out of nowhere after the tree metaphor, though I'd like to acknowledge the quirky direction. Beautiful :)

[Armanis]

It is actually intentional, slow cookers, since this is a religious poem it does operate a bit differently, and though, I could manage to edit that part out, but in doing so would increase word count including other various comparisons to the length of the life of a tree, which is far longer than how you would properly cook a meal over 24 hours, so maybe you're right.

[Ruth]

Thank you for the clarification. Cool beans.