Losing Control

Stars twinkle bright in the midnight sky

Outside, snowflakes sparkle as they drift to the ground

Candles create a walk way for me as I continue down the hall

A flower path extends down the floor leading me to her

 

At the end of the path holds an intoxicating smell

The light from the candles illuminate the bedroom walls

Red and white petals cover the floor like a blanket

  It’s as beautiful as the sight of the first snow untouched

 

Standing there in front of me is an angle like figure

The very sight of her almost knocks me off my feet

Light flickers across her incredible and flawless body

Her big beautiful eyes catch my gaze and pull me in

 

She moves towards me step by step almost dance like

Leaning to the side of me she presses her perfect lips against my neck

As her lips climb up me they find my lips

The heat between us increases as our tongues intertwine

 

Her gentle hands move under my shirt and up my body

Dropping it to the floor she wraps her arms around me

Our bodies press up against each other as our hearts begin to race

Her soft skin making it that much harder to resist

 

Taking my hand she leads me over to the bed

I watch as what little clothes she has on slips to the floor

She giggles and shows her breath taking smile

She crawls over towards me her perfume flooding my senses

 

With each passing second I lose more control to her

Her lips trace up and down my body leaving a warm sensation

Once again our lips meet creating a fire between us

Knowing she’s won I give in and roll her onto her back

Reviews

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ohh..saucy, sensual and sensational..so descriptive!

[Liza]

you did a wonderful job Kelley Ann

[Adam :P]

incredible imagery very romantic, i like it.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is incredible imagery and it is romantic and very stimulating. You use all the senses to draw your reader in and the flow is very smooth. It feels as if I was walking into one of those private moments that no one talks about. Great write.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Amazing imagery, well written!

[Dream Weaver]

What can I say but such a tremendous piece!
beautifully done...

[*Evelen*]

This is soo good! Very cute in a way. Well done.

[MissWordSmith]

Wow! This made me smile! I loved the end! I don't know how to describe what it made me feel..
"Knowing she's won I give in and roll her onto her back"
Knowing SHE'S won... almost like knowing she's won YOU over...
This was done so tastefully and sensually. I must save it in my Reading list and analyze it more later.
Keep writing! This was done very well! Certainly intriguing.

[Jeff]

Wow! Great piece. Very enchanting!

[*skittlez*]

i really really really like your poem you wrote it is amazing