Temporary Fix

Temporary Fix

A Poem by aronjm
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Written 11/8/2011

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"It's a temporary fix, my love

An impermanent stitch.

A break is all we need-

Time for our hearts to breathe."

 

When the time is right

We'll reconvene

 

A week?

A month?

A half a year?

 

How long til wounds will mend?

 

9 months have passed...

Stitches dissipated

 

The wound appears healed on the outside

Perfectly pink for all to see...

 

But the gangrene is underneath.

© 2011 aronjm


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This is Love is about the beginning months of my relationship with "him" and 7 years later Temporary Fix is the end. I never wrote a single poem in between...

Posted 14 Years Ago


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superb visuals and powerful metaphors ..I know that line is the biggest load of bull ...yeah 'we need some space'..huh? 'well theres a universe full of it honey..help yourself' LOL

Posted 14 Years Ago


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THAT was strong...

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aronjm
aronjm

Providence, RI



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I recently found my notebooks from 2000-2003 where I wrote a lot of journal entries and poetry. I was between the ages of 14 and 17 at the time. Now at 26, it's kind of amazing to go back and read the.. more..