Sometimes

28/09/12

Sometimes a heart can heal

With just a few words of peace

Sometimes a heart can melt

For the tears of pain tied inside

Sometimes a smile can bring a virtue

With all the memories to go by

Sometimes you may not know where you’re going

And there will be always someone to guide you by

But sometimes you just have to say goodbye

And forget the times you’ve cried and live your life

Author's Note

Got back into writing a poem after sometime .. getting back into one of those moods i guess .. anyways .. your comments are appreciated :))

Reviews

[Alexis suzzanne]

My heart like this one can be healed by just a word of kindess but never forever. YOU learn to get over the fact that life can be a truly wicked thing. Why? well because you realize the joy it brings with each step you take every kiss you recieve every choice you make. You do have to say good bye to move on so your heart doesn't explode from depression.. Forget the past tears prepare for the future happiness. There is bound to be a time for happiness some where in your life time.

[Amila Jay]

Wow .. thanks :)

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

What a wonderful lines, full depth of feelings! Great Job!

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad and beautiful poem. There is a lot of wisdom in your words. Sadness make us appreciate the good times and laughter.
"But sometimes you just have to say goodbye
And forget the times you’ve cried and live your life"
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Leslie Philibert]

and this is fine, a classical theme maybe, but put together with talent and quality.

[Art Sun]

nice work...yes sometimes you have to let the past...be the past...

[Ruth]

Life is to be lived, indeed...
Powerful reminder! xoxo

[Rhea752]

very powerful, very emotional. Keep writing!!!

[Hester Vane]

Beautiful but sad! A great start back to poetry

[Pratik]

Welcome back! Reading you after a long time.. Melancholic, disarrayed feelings organized into this piece... nice work! But I bet you can still improve this!

[Amila Jay]

Yeah I'm back :) thanks ... yep .. this copy could be improved in a way ... but thanks :))