Teenage Crime

A poem about the feelings that might be running inside a teenager's mind

 

A head full of questions

An earful of blames

An eyeful of memories

Hard to erase

The heart is soiled

The pain is boiled

Your compromises were nothing but lies

You poisoned my life

Sickened my mind

And had me held by the end of the line

 

Author's Note

Readers please let me know what you think of the poem

Reviews

[Aly Jones]

This was amazing. Every line captured the same emotions without any repetition.

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Lovely writing! I like whole poem. Keep it up!
God bless you!
Lucky!

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Wow so good! Right to the point...
Love it!!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Hardly effected the Agony interior, Nice short poem to justice

[Amila Jay]

thank you for the comment!!!!

[Tasha]

This was short but to the point. It really packed a punch with the message.

"And had me held by the end of the line."

Wonderful write.
♥ Ta'Shandra