Hurt

broken hearted

Songs about lost love

Blaring on the TV screen

The guitar strings are broken

So is the young heart that used to love with arms wide open

Clothes and books thrown all over the place

He stares into deep space

In a corner she weeps

Creating illusions

The heart is melting

Hurt is erupting

Author's Note

lemme know your views..thanks

Reviews

[Sudhanshu]

very evocative. I like the lines, " In a corner she weeps creating illusions."

[Becky C Strukamp]

A very touching, tender poem of the pain of love. Wonderful!

[FallenWingz]

oh wow...that is what hurt the most......this poem has raw emotions coming forth.

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

This is really very good writing. I like whole poem. Keep it up!
Do you read mine too "ANGUISH and SHE"
GOD BLESS YOU!

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wonderfully written, enjoyed

[Richielee]

nicely done with vivid imagery