A sudden death

death

 Like a feather I flew so lightly

Like a dewdrop I touched the ground so slowly

Like a flower so pretty I was touched tenderly

I was flourished in love like in spring

But when the storm came

I lost everything

I lost me

Thus I lay my head on the hard dirty ground

To rest for eternity 

Author's Note

lemme know your views...thanks

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

To me, this poem takes us through life's journey. Coming into the world graciously, living free and easy then the storm comes and takes us away. Excellent write.

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Sad, but so well expressed

[joshua deathdealer]

I love this...Excellent imagery and sad but honest words..Very well done..xx