Busy Life

modern life

Five text messages lined up in a row

She’s still fast asleep

The alarm goes off

It’s seven o’clock

“Ting” another text message

And then the phone rings

“Come over soon we are about to leave” says a voice

“Give me ten” she says and goes back to sleep

 

Author's Note

lemme know your views...thanks

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Very relateable write. That 5 more minutes sometimes means everything.

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just a few more mintues then i will get up, Love this.
Amazing write.

[joshua deathdealer]

I do the same thing lol. Nice write..xx

[Richielee]

i hate getting up in morning so can relate

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Haha, I know I always ask for "five more minutes" ^_^ Cute poem!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

"Give me ten", it's simple, short and expertley guided, a true smile worthy piece, well done, good read.