The Spider

Silent creeper
With thin legs
Came down
In the invisibility
Of a thread
Eyed all corners
And built a web
Smooth and royal
Like a bed
And waited for his guest
A little black ant
Who walked right into his trap

Author's Note

As always..lemme know your views..thanks:)

Reviews

[Egoless]

Awesome! I hate spiders as a rule but this poem made them seem elegant and intriguing! Great write

Lovely write, hmmm spiders, I hope it was a black widdow ;) gnegne :D

[joshua deathdealer]

lol cute write.

[RISHABH ARORA]

good write !!! :) liked it !!! :D

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Very cute and wonderful ^_^ I like it!

[Sudhanshu]

Nice one. it reminds me of the lines, " Will you come into my parlour said the spider to the fly" which we used to read in our school-days.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice and smooth trap to lay down for the enemys food......

[Inyourshadow]

I hate flies so therefore adore spiders as apart from being beautiful they eat flies lol. Love the way you penned the spiders day and showed their creativity. Keep em' coming

[Becky C Strukamp]

This is so cute. I recently wrote a poem of a spider but havent posted yet. It was black and ugly and scary. You penned this well. I really enjoyed reading it.

[Judy Ponceby]

I like spiders and this is very well done. :) I like the rhyme scheme. I wonder if the last line would work without the word "Who"? Just a thought :) Enjoyed this very much :)