A Vampire Awaits

Another bloodless vampire...

Calm and soundless

In the darkness of daylight

In my core

A shell of hell

Thinking of ways to fill my nights

By giving you my agony

By taking away your life

Motionless I wait

Night is falling

Time for glory

 

Author's Note

lemme know your views, thanks:)

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

Cool. Imagery is penned well. Excellent vampire poem. Nice pen upon this.

[Leslie Philibert]

This is the second one I`ve read. Liked the clever internal rhyme ..a shell of hell.
Keep working on your poems, you`ve got lots to offer.

[joshua deathdealer]

Awesome write!! Great ending..xx

[Thea]

Great writing...Short but really understandable! Amazing... :)))

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Wow, so nicely done, Love this one.