Déjà vu

An aura of light flashes in my mind

Like a déjà vu of what I left behind

When I look back at those moments

We had spent together

I get nothing but the pale smell of dead flowers

I once ranked our love to the highest point in the sky

But it only got inferior like a day gone by

I’m aghasted and wasted

since you've tasted and devastated my love

This déjà vu is a crime of time

Just the way you’ve replayed it

Author's Note

I wrote this as a song but I cut out some parts and made it a poem; it's a bit short as usual. thanks to all those read and review :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Déjà vu is one of my favorite words. I like the way you used the word in the poem. The poem is written with a veteran pen of love and disappointment. I like the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Though it may have started as a poem, it still sounds very lyrical when I read it. Nicely done. Great write.

[Mockingbird]

deja vu is so fleeting, even if it's a bad memory, you've still captured it. it was vivid to you in every sense. unfortunately this will trigger the things we want to forget about most. a great description and instance of deja vu.

[Jordan's Back]

Awesome picture painted.

[Sahar moonlight]

this is perfectly written. with a catchy title.
Thanks for sharing :)
nicely expressed

[Cassie Fraga]

oooooohhhh how I feel this piece!!! almost as if you jumped in my head and just penned my thoughts!!! **tips my lyrical wand to you** this is def. going into my fav. pile!! thank you for sharing such a GREAT write!!

[Enigma]

Interesting. I like it. :)