Waiting on a Ghost

I never knew you but I still loved you

At five or six I will wait by thee

Starring into the water in front of me

Painting a portrayal of you in my heart

As a silent June wind blows in my face

They try to tell me that you don’t exist

That you are dead and gone; you are history

But waiting for you is the only thing that cures me

For one thing is true

I had never known you but I still love you

Author's Note

Inspired by the movie Cold Mountain. Thanks to all those who read and review:-)

Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Beautifully penned. Nicely done.

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

AJ, this is what it is all about. best line:

As a silent June wind blows in my face

[joshua deathdealer]

Beautiful. Great movie and poem..xx

[Jordan's Back]

This is so beautiful and Brilliant.

Reminds me of a Robert Frost poem. Wonderful!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. Strong statements gave life to the powerful poem.
Coyote

[EMF]

Stunning. Doesn't just leave you breathless, but kicks your feet awy from under you. A truly exceptional write.

[Cassie Fraga]

WOW!!! the inspiration you caught to make such a master piece.... that must have been one hell of a movie... GREAT WRITE!!!

[umesh]

Wow you touched my heart with this.last two line was the best
I had never known you but i still love you
you know why i love this so much