Toothache

that darn thing

 

It starts with a pinch

Right on the cheek

At the joint of the jaw

It stings

Then spread its roots of pain

All across the teeth

Bang shot I keep my hand

Damn it hurts

My body starts to weaken

I think I am going to faint

Biting my tongue hard

Going all the way up to my ear

And clusters in the neck

Some body please give me a pill

Author's Note

Now how much does it hurt?

Reviews

[M Garcia]

Interesting.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Hmm. I'm not sure if its how I'm reading this or not, but it seemed a little too hard for me to follow. I enjoyed this, I just think it needs a little tweeking and playing around with to really bring it all together. Keep going, though!