Let The Stress Out

Take a walk downtown

To your favorite club

Spill some chills

Down your throat

Feel a cold rush run

Run through your spine

Do a jive and feel the vibe

Get a kick out of your selfless life

 

Author's Note

Trying to have some fun!! ;) Thanks to all those who read and review:)

Reviews

[Liza]

i didnt sense the sarcasm until the last line; i dont know if it was - maybe - maybe not - maybe i'm in the frame of mind of seeing that as selfish rather than selfless...or letting go of the self - thought provoking - i wouldn't rate the content since i'm one to perceive what one is attempting to connect with :)

[Lipstick_Lesbian]

This poem reminded me of summer time :] I loved the playfulness juxtaposed with the cynicism and biting sarcasm. Really skillful writing.

[dreaming dame]

:) I smiled reading this, it's loose, and I agree, we do need to let loose.

[M Garcia]

Great work.