My Heart Is Cornered

I am almost here but you were never there

I can cry a river but will that make you care

Rain drops freeze my lips from saying

How much I loved you when everyone dared

Falling amongst the sound of your words

That pours as tears down my cheeks

My heart is but a mirror of broken dreams

As I dug my trench to bleed

I am nothing more inside

My heart is cornering away from me

 

Author's Note

Just thoughts flashing by ...Thanks to all those who read and review :)

Reviews

[reflectingus]

So emotional, and thoughtful, I can't help but admire the intensity with which you wrote this poem. Every word has been beautifully written, and seems like it has been hand-picked, chosen carefully, and this shows exactly the fragility of the heart, and how we bleed love and suffer from ignorance as it goes "Falling amongst the sound of your words that pours as tears down my cheeks". This is so beautifully written, I really enjoyed. However, heartbreak is just a phase of life, we all get over it, and eventually, life mends it. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you made the words work in this poem. A good word person can make the language sing and dance. I could feel the sadness and the desire in this poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sleeping Maiden]

whoa, such heartache! It's very sad and emotional..
oh how love can be the dangerous weapon used.. against us.
I love this poem though. =) Such emotions whirling inside me as I read this!
Great write! thanks for sharing.