Haiku 1

The light shone in my face

My eyes burned in pain

I took a knife

To make a slit through my neck

Author's Note

Thought I'd write something like a haiku....

Reviews

[M Garcia]

Another great Haiku. You should definitely try more of them.

[An owl on the moon]

This creates a stunning image that stops the heart... the painfulness of life coming undone, washing over all things bright and bringing only forever night.

[Matt "Mickey" Denney]

Dark. :) But I like dark. Nice writing. Write on!